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Monday, July 5, 2021

MY Pet Turtle Rockey

 WALT; Describe a pet

I have written a story describing my pet turtle Rocky he is awesome. I hope you enjoy it.

  • WALT:  Describe a pet


  • Describe your pet, go into explicit detail to describe

  • your pet. - Age, colour, looks size

  • Include juicy descriptive words in your writing - use synonyms to extend your

  • writing vocabulary.

  • What are the characteristics of your pet, what do you notice?

  • Explain what you like or love about your pet

  • You must have 2 simile in your writing

  • Spelling and punctuation -

  • proofread so that Writing Week 7, Term 2, 2021 - Descriptive writing



14.06.21

My Pet Turtle

My pet turtle is Rocky and he makes funny noises with his food. 

Rocky likes to go up onto a platform to have a sit.   Rocky likes to eat shrimp and turtle pallets.  

He can not see the glass so Rocky always runs into it.

Rocky lives in a big tank with his brother Rosie.   Yes that's right Rosie.

Rocky is a slow turtle, he has a light on the platform to help keep his shell nice and hard.

He has green eyes. He is a cold blooded red headed slider turtle. He is very cool and cute.

Rocky has sharp claws too. He is so much fun to play with but he likes to knock over the

water glass sometimes. If you put your finger in the tank they will try to bite your finger.

Rocky is three years old.





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